Fall 1 (Akt 1) Page 12

posted Sunday, the 17th of April at 1:28 PM, 2011

Fall 1 (Akt 1) Page 12
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Sunday, the 17th of April at 1:28 PM, 2011

RyoshiMicchi

Okay, I'll try to update every sunday from now on, so that's the official schedule at the moment. If the buffer of pages is big enough, I might even upload up to 3 pages, so you should check the previos page just in case so you don't miss anything^^

Also, this page is a liiiiittle bit weird, but our little Johann will explain his powers (sort of) in the next chapter^^

Tree texture in panel 1 by http://mysticalpchan.deviantart.com/

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Monday, the 18th of April at 4:44 PM, 2011

therebeunicorns

character design and drawing is very nice, but I feel you may spend too much time screentone-ing. I admit they give the art a very nice feel, but don't rely on them too much for background or your readers may not know where the characters are. Overall though, really beautiful. :3

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Tuesday, the 19th of April at 12:52 AM, 2011

RyoshiMicchi

Thank you for the critique^^
Yeah, I used quite a lot tones for the bg the past pages couse I did'nt had much time lately (I actually love drawing trees, I don't know what was driving me there XD). I guess I'll edit that later, once I have a big enough buffer of pages done^^

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Friday, the 22nd of April at 10:44 PM, 2011

vwyler

Lovely art. Ethereal. :)

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