I decided to upload another page today, so I may not upload two next week (it's going to be a double page, so, hey, I guess that still counts as two pages a week :P)
BTW: do the black things in the bg of the first panel look like trees? Bbecouse that's how I wanted to draw the trees when I revise the previos pages (too much screentones arrrgh!) and it was pretty easy to draw them this way so I'd like to hear some opinions on them^^
The trees are okay, but the perspective on the rifle is off in both panels. Especially the head-on shot. Might want to google some photos with something similar happening. That kind of perspective is tough to pull off. :)
Such cool textures...
Ilike your work of art!